Comments on: Are you riven with writing anxiety? https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/ & Gray-Grant Communications Tue, 22 Nov 2016 14:36:02 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.1 By: Daphne Gray-Grant https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/#comment-8526 Tue, 22 Nov 2016 14:36:00 +0000 http://pubcoach2018.wpengine.com/?p=15761#comment-8526 In reply to Russ Skinner.

Ah, now I see it! I thought you were commenting on something in the Globe and Mail story, when, instead, you were commenting on a sentence in my blog! (I should have figured this! After all, I don’t have my posts copy edited.) Anyway, you are quite right: it was a typo. I have now fixed it.

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By: Russ Skinner https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/#comment-8525 Tue, 22 Nov 2016 14:24:00 +0000 http://pubcoach2018.wpengine.com/?p=15761#comment-8525 In reply to Daphne Gray-Grant.

The paragraph starts, “Smith’s conclusion…”

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By: Daphne Gray-Grant https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/#comment-8523 Tue, 22 Nov 2016 04:38:00 +0000 http://pubcoach2018.wpengine.com/?p=15761#comment-8523 In reply to Russ Skinner.

Totally don’t see it in the penultimate graf:
“The poet Damian Rogers pointed out that Sylvia Plath wrote her monumental collection Ariel by rising at 4 a.m. every morning, before the kids were up. This was not, apparently, because she was particularly disciplined, but because that was when her sleeping pill from the night before wore off. She had no choice.” Or am I looking in the wrong place?

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By: Russ Skinner https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/#comment-8522 Tue, 22 Nov 2016 03:38:00 +0000 http://pubcoach2018.wpengine.com/?p=15761#comment-8522 In reply to Daphne Gray-Grant.

Second sentence, penultimate paragraph.

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By: Daphne Gray-Grant https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/#comment-8521 Tue, 22 Nov 2016 02:59:00 +0000 http://pubcoach2018.wpengine.com/?p=15761#comment-8521 In reply to Russ Skinner.

Hmm, I don’t see that clause anywhere… “The it” makes no sense to me!

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By: Russ Skinner https://www.publicationcoach.com/writing-anxiety/#comment-8520 Tue, 22 Nov 2016 02:54:00 +0000 http://pubcoach2018.wpengine.com/?p=15761#comment-8520 Daphne, I love Russell Smith’s use of “riven,” but am somewhat anxious about the editing of the clause, “The other writers suggested he not fight the it.”

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